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2019-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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This morning, I went to the yoga academy The academy is nearby my home and has easy curriculum I think their curriculum is for just like physical fitness enhancement I was surprised you were injured in yoga Maybe I think your yoga level would be high \"Assist\" means to help other people \"Delegate\" means representive of conference How come you`re so influent in English? What are you doing here in this conference? I was born in Cheongju, Korea I have never been to other country

강사 첨삭

Hi Mi Jin! Thank you for sharing! Good job!~ ^^

-Teacher Jedah

This morning, I went to the yoga academy.

>>CORRECT
The academy is nearby my home and has easy curriculum.

>>CORRECT
I think their curriculum is for just like physical fitness enhancement

>>CORRECT
I was surprised you were injured in yoga

>>CORRECT
Maybe I think your yoga level would be high

>>I think your yoga level is advanced.
\"Assist\" means to help other people

>>CORRECT
\"Delegate\" means representive of conference

>>\"Delegate\" means a representative to a conference.
How come you`re so influent in English?

>>How come you\'re so fluent in English?
What are you doing here in this conference?

>>CORRECT
I was born in Cheongju, Korea

>>CORRECT
I have never been to other country

>>I have never been to other countries.

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