english work

2019-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

What are you going to do? - I`m going to reveiw this english class and I have to pick up my daughter from daycare center What is the best thing about your birthplace? -There is an Airforce academy, It is famous university in Korea and this city also is called educational city in Korea -I didnt remember about Cheongju because I was very young when I lived there. How is our accent affected by our birthplace? -People from Cheongju tend to speak slowly at the end of sentence -Their accent is different from Seoul`s I think your birthplace will be Switzerland. Is that right? *Homework She is not carrying a back Albert is not playing a squash We are not walking in the mountains He is not going to school The teacher is not checking our homework We are not cleaning our rooms Your father is not driving a lorry They are not swimming in the lake He is not wearing a blue shirt You are not bringing flowers

강사 첨삭

Hi Mi Jin! Thank you for reviewing your sentences and taking the time in doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^

For your homework; you did great, it\'s quite easy, right? Just a reminder, please do not forget to put a period ( . ) at the end of your sentences, okay? ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

- I`m going to reveiw this english class and I have to pick up my daughter from daycare center

>> I`m going to review for this English class and I have to pick up my daughter from the daycare center.

-There is an Airforce academy, It is famous university in Korea

>>This is a famous Air Force academy in Korea.
and this city also is called educational city in Korea

>>And this city is also called the educational city of Korea.
-I didnt remember about Cheongju because I was very young when I lived there.

>>I can\'t remember much about Cheongju because I was only very young when I lived there.

-People from Cheongju tend to speak slowly at the end of sentence

>>People from Cheongju tend to speak slowly at the end of their sentences.
-Their accent is different from Seoul`s

>>CORRECT
I think your birthplace will be Switzerland. Is that right?

>>I think your birthplace is Switzerland, is that right?

She is not carrying a back

>>She is not carrying a bag.
Albert is not playing a squash

>>CORRECT
We are not walking in the mountains

>>CORRECT
He is not going to school

>>CORRECT
The teacher is not checking our homework

>>CORRECT
We are not cleaning our rooms

>>CORRECT
Your father is not driving a lorry

>>CORRECT
They are not swimming in the lake

>>CORRECT
He is not wearing a blue shirt

>>CORRECT
You are not bringing flowers

>>CORRECT

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