English writhing
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름],
Thank you for the homework!
Please continue with the great job!
For sure, I can correct your text every day!
Have a nice day!
Teacher Elly.
English writhing
>>English writing
Elly Hi.
>>Hi Elly.
i want to collection of my foreign friends to send a text to me.
>>I want my collection of foreign friends to send me a text.
can you correct a text everyday.-this sentence have to correct.-
friends-Hi.
>>Can you correct a text every day? (The sentences have to be correct, because I need to say “hi” to my friends.)
i damaged myself a little lifting weight and pulled a muscle in my back.
>>I hurt myself a little by lifting some weights and pulled a muscle on my back.
We cannot meet tomorrow.
CORRECT!
or>>We are unable to meet tomorrow.
me-Are you okay?you should go to hospital.
>>Me: Are you okay? You should go to the hospital.
friends- now you have a new meeting link.
>>Friends: You now have a new meeting link.
meetings start at 10:00AM Korea time
>>The meeting starts at 10:00AM Korea time.
>>Have a wonderful day.
me- okay David. thank you.
>>Me: Okay, David. Thank you.
Have a good day.
CORRECT!
or>>Have a wonderful day.
friends- you too Art...
>>Friends: You too, Art
or>>Friends: Have a nice day as well.
I\'m going to take the puppy for a walk.
CORRECT!
or>>I will take the puppy for a stroll.
me- Good job.. you\'re puppy is to make cute movements?
>>Me: Good job! Does your puppy like making cute movements?
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