English writhing

2020-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

Elly Hi. i want to collection of my foreign friends to send a text to me. can you correct a text everyday.-this sentence have to correct.- friends-Hi. i damaged myself a little lifting weight and pulled a muscle in my back. we cannot meet tomorrow. me-Are you okay?you should go to hospital. friends- now you have a new meeting link. meetings start at 10:00AM Korea time Have a wanderful day. me- okay David. thank you. Have a good day. friends- you too Art... i\'m going to take the puppy for a walk me- Good job.. you\'re puppy is to make cute movements?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름],

Thank you for the homework!

Please continue with the great job!

For sure, I can correct your text every day!

Have a nice day!

Teacher Elly.

English writhing

>>English writing

Elly Hi.

>>Hi Elly.

i want to collection of my foreign friends to send a text to me.

>>I want my collection of foreign friends to send me a text.

can you correct a text everyday.-this sentence have to correct.-

friends-Hi.

>>Can you correct a text every day? (The sentences have to be correct, because I need to say “hi” to my friends.)

i damaged myself a little lifting weight and pulled a muscle in my back.

>>I hurt myself a little by lifting some weights and pulled a muscle on my back.

We cannot meet tomorrow.

CORRECT!

or>>We are unable to meet tomorrow.

me-Are you okay?you should go to hospital.

>>Me: Are you okay? You should go to the hospital.

friends- now you have a new meeting link.

>>Friends: You now have a new meeting link.

meetings start at 10:00AM Korea time

>>The meeting starts at 10:00AM Korea time.

>>Have a wonderful day.

me- okay David. thank you.

>>Me: Okay, David. Thank you.

Have a good day.

CORRECT!

or>>Have a wonderful day.

friends- you too Art...

>>Friends: You too, Art

or>>Friends: Have a nice day as well.

I\'m going to take the puppy for a walk.

CORRECT!

or>>I will take the puppy for a stroll.

me- Good job.. you\'re puppy is to make cute movements?

>>Me: Good job! Does your puppy like making cute movements?

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