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~ T. Irene ~
Dear All,
>>> Dear Everyone,
>>> To Everyone:
Company has been preparing Flexible working hours system since Last year.
>>> The company has been preparing a Flexible working hours system since last year.
Staring the March Consulting firm interviewed with the employees who were interested in it.
>>> Staring last March, the consulting firm interviewed the employees who were interested in it.
After the interview, the purchasing team was selected as a test team as of April.
>>> Correct.
Because this team has a lot of time schedule and domestic travel during working hours.
>>> Because this team has a full schedule and a lot of domestic trips during the working hours.
Starting from Purchasing Team, HR plans to expand flexible working hours to all employee end of June.
>>> Starting with the purchasing team, HR plans to expand flexible working hours to all employees by the end of June.
HR will have a meeting with Purchasing team member, discuss how we handle the problem and how we organize the flexible working hours system.
>>> HR will have a meeting with the purchasing team members to discuss how we will handle the problem and how we can organize the flexible working hours system.
For comfortable settlement in the company, Please consider core time is from 10:00 am to 14:00 pm.
>>> For a comfortable settlement in the company, please take note that the core time is from 10:00 am to 14:00 pm.
>>> For a comfortable working atmosphere in the company, please take note that the core time is from 10:00 am to 14:00 pm.
>>> For comfortable relationships in the company, please take note that the core time is from 10:00 am to 14:00 pm.
please using core time to have meeting or appointments.
>>> Please use the core time to have (conduct) meetings or appointments.
the employee can schedule their own schedule on a daily basis.
>>> The employee can make their own schedule on a daily basis.
Please share your idea and concern to HR to settle down Flexible working hour system in the company.
>>> Please share your ideas and concerns to HR so they can finalize (solidify) the flexible working hour system in the company.
Thank you for your cooperation.
>>> Correct.
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