English writing interview expected question\'s answer
학생이 쓴 원문
1.
If I face the problem, I will solve the problem through below ways.
First, I return my first place looking on the floor. If there are staffs. I will ask to them whether you can my wallet.
Second, I find the lost-and-found. If they have not my wallet, I will give memo which have my phone number and character of my wallet.
Even if I can’t find out, I will directly call to report the lost cards.
After that, when I go to the home, I will fill out report to find my wallet in the airport homepage, and in police office homepage.
2.
The solution looks like at Korean university.
First, I will find out the notice about withdraw in university webpage. It usually can be found.
If I find out, I should do through the notice.
If I can’t find out, I will call to the international education office. I will ask how I withdraw the subjects. I think It is best way to solve any problem in school.
In the other way, I can ask to another international students and native students. Group can solve easier.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] [이름]!
Here are the suggestions I have made for your written answers. I must say that you thought about your answers well. They show very systematic ways on how to solve some challenges encountered in the airport or in school. These are very good for you to know because they might really happen when you go to Finland.
Thank you for sending these answers. If you have more answers to send me, I would be very glad to help always.
Keep up the good work always!
-T. Donna =)
If I face the problem, I will solve the problem through below ways.
>> If I face this problem, I will solve the problem through the ways below.
First, I return my first place looking on the floor. If there are staffs. I will ask to them whether you can my wallet.
>> First, I will return to the first place and look on the floor. If there are staff, I will ask them whether they have seen my wallet.
Second, I find the lost-and-found. If they have not my wallet, I will give memo which have my phone number and character of my wallet.
>> Second, I will find it in the lost-and-found section. If they have not my wallet, I will give them a memo which has my phone number and the character of my wallet.
Even if I can’t find out, I will directly call to report the lost cards.
>> Correct!
After that, when I go to the home, I will fill out report to find my wallet in the airport homepage, and in police office homepage.
After that, when I go to the home, I will fill out report to find my wallet in the airport homepage, and in police office homepage.
>> After that, when I go to home, I will fill out a report to find my wallet in the airport homepage, and in the police office homepage.
2. What would you do if you have to withdraw your class?
The solution looks like at Korean university.
2. What would you do if you have to withdraw your class?
The solution looks like at Korean university.
>> The solution looks like at the Korean university.
First, I will find out the notice about withdraw in university webpage. It usually can be found.
>> First, I will find out the notice about withdrawing in the university webpage. It can be usually found there.
If I find out, I should do through the notice.
>> If I find out, I should do it through the notice.
If I can’t find out, I will call to the international education office. I will ask how I withdraw the subjects. I think It is best way to solve any problem in school.
>> If I can’t find out, I will call the international education office. I will ask how I can withdraw the subjects. I think It is the best way to solve any problem in school.
In the other way, I can ask to another international students and native students. Group can solve easier.
>> Another way is, asking another international students and native students. A group can solve things easier.
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