Englsih letter

Dear [Name], Hi Eric.Do you think about another game to play our time fun.You know what these day I don't like playing chess. We usually play chess when we meet. So, I don't want to play chess anymore. But when we play with another board game we will lose toy. And we like playing game. But we do not have our own phone.If we ask "I want you to lend your phone only one hour."they will be angry.So, playing game is impossible.When you think our new games tell me. [이름]

Hi [이름]!^^   I\'m glad you did your homework and I really appreciate that. You did a good job I must say. I know you gave it your best and I commend you for trying. Below are the corrections that I\'ve made so I hope you will review on your errors and try to construct sentences again. Be very careful in choosing punctuation marks. Just practice and practice on creating sentences. Remember, practice makes perfect!^^   --Teacher Kris   Dear [Name], >>> Correct OR: >>> Dearest Eric,Hi Eric. >>> Hi Eric! Do you think about another game to play our time fun. >>> Can you think of another game that we can play to have fun time? You know what these day I don\'t like playing chess. >>> You know what, these days I don\'t feel like playing chess. We usually play chess when we meet. >>> Correct OR: >>> When we meet, we usually play chess. >>> We usually play chess everytime we meet. So, I don\'t want to play chess anymore. >>> CorrectYOU CAN SIMPLY SAY: >>> I don\'t like to play chess anymore. But when we play with another board game we will lose toy. >>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: But when we play with another board game we might lose or misplace some parts. And we like playing game. >>> We like playing games. OR: >>> We like playing board games. But we do not have our own phone. >>> But we don\'t have our own phones. If we ask \"I want you to lend your phone only one hour.\"they will be angry. >>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: If we borrow someone else\'s phone for an hour they\'ll be angry. So, playing game is impossible. >>> So playing another game is impossible. When you think our new games tell me. >>> If you come up with new games, tell me right away.[이름] >>> Correct