Enjoy
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] What are the things you enjoy doing with your friends or cousins?
I enjoy doing experiment with natural object.
Natural object like soil, leaves, fruit and water.
I do an experiment like mixing soil and fruit, filtering clean water in dirty soil.
I like science and so do my frineds.
My friends and I work in perfect harmony when we do experiment.
I like my friends!!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Clair!
Here\'s your edited homework!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What are the things you enjoy doing with your friends or cousins?
I enjoy doing experiment with natural object. Natural object like soil, leaves, fruit and water.
>> I enjoy doing experiments with natural objects.
>> or: I enjoy experimenting with natural objects, such as soil, leaves, fruit, or water.
I do an experiment like mixing soil and fruit, filtering clean water in dirty soil.
>> I would mix the soil and fruits, and filter the clean water in dirty soil.
I like science and so do my frineds.
>> I like science and so do my friends.
>> or: I love science and so do my friends.
My friends and I work in perfect harmony when we do experiment.
>> or: We work in perfect harmony when we do experiments.
I like my friends!!
>> or: I love my friends!
>> or: I\'m very close to my friends.
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