enjoy shopping
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I rarely do shopping for others.
I used to do it a few years ago, I don`t want to do it
Each of them has different tastes, so I always go for an exchange.
Especially, my family never goes shopping. even if their clothes and shoes are worn out.
In the end, I have no choice but to go.
It`s really tiring to go buy and change four people`s needs.
If they don`t go with me now, I won`t buy it
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Good day Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for always doing your homework. Keep up the good work! See you later!
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>> CORRECT
>>.. I\'m not doing it anymore.
>> .. so I always go for return and exchange.
>> CORRECT (remove the period [.] after the word shopping )
>> Especially, my family never goes shopping even if their clothes and shoes are worn out.
>> CORRECT
>> It\'s really tiring to go buy for four person\'s needs.
>> If they won\'t come with me to shop, I won\'t buy it.
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