Enjoy your shopping enough, you just buy the things what you need.
학생이 쓴 원문
Shopping is my pleasure.
When I go shopping, I buy the things I do not need.
So if I do not want to regret after shopping, I should make a shopping list.
Or I go shpping with my wife.
Enjoy your shopping enough, you just buy the things what you need.
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Shopping is my pleasure.
>> Correct!
When I go shopping, I buy the things I do not need.
>> When I go shopping, I usually buy the things that I do not need.
So if I do not want to regret after shopping, I should make a shopping list. Or I go shpping with my wife.
>> So, if I do not want to regret after shopping then I should make a shopping list or I\'ll better go shopping with my wife.
Enjoy your shopping enough, you just buy the things what you need.
>> We should enjoy shopping but we should buy only the things that we need.
>> Correct!
When I go shopping, I buy the things I do not need.
>> When I go shopping, I usually buy the things that I do not need.
So if I do not want to regret after shopping, I should make a shopping list. Or I go shpping with my wife.
>> So, if I do not want to regret after shopping then I should make a shopping list or I\'ll better go shopping with my wife.
Enjoy your shopping enough, you just buy the things what you need.
>> We should enjoy shopping but we should buy only the things that we need.
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