enjoyed by people
학생이 쓴 원문
Ordinary people think I have nothing to do with art.
I wish there was an event where more people could participate.
If there are many works that anyone can appreciate in a daily space
I think people will feel closer to Art
I think the world and the people we live in are the greatest.
So sometimes let`s look up at the sky, and trees and clouds
Let`s feel the wind and sunshine
Maybe Art is a lot closer than we think.
It`s just casual pass I`ve been chased.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for doing your homework diligently. You did great. Continue practicing. Have a great day. - T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
Ordinary people think I have nothing to do with art.
I wish there was an event where more people could participate.
If there are many works that anyone can appreciate in a daily space, I think people will feel closer to Art.
I think the world and the people we live in are the greatest.
So sometimes let`s look up at the sky, and trees and clouds
Let`s feel the wind and sunshine
Maybe Art is a lot closer than we think.
It`s just casual pass I`ve been chased.
Here are your corrections:
Ordinary people think I have nothing to do with art.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> So, sometimes let\'s look up the sky, the trees, and the clouds.
>> CORRECT
>> Maybe, Art is a lot closer to us than we think.
>> It\'s just a casual pass. I\'ve been chased.
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