Enjoying the festival

2021-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When I was a teenager, I didn\'t know about singers well. I was also not interested in music. But today I have my favorite k-pop band and prefer listening to many kinds of music so I can enjoy the festival more.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Wow, that really does sound festive. :) Music really uplifts everyone\'s mood. Thanks for sharing :)

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When I was a teenager, I didn\'t know about singers well.

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I was also not interested in music.

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But today I have my favorite K-pop band and prefer listening to many kinds of music so I can enjoy the festival more.

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