Enlarging your Vision. 2
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Well, Mr. [Name], what you have shared is quite an eye opener actually.
I have realized a lot of things because of this. Thank you very much.
And may you have a great weekend too. See you next week!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Like this If we don\'t think we can have something good, then we never will.
>> correct!
The barrier is in our mind.
>> correct!
It\'s not God\'s lack of resources or our lack of talent that prevents you from prospering.
>> It\'s not God\'s lack of resources or our lack of talent that prevents us from prospering.
Our own wrong thinking can keep you from God\'s best.
>> Our own wrong thinking can keep us from God\'s best.
I also have limited my abilities and better future.
>> I also have limited my abilities and a better future.
I impressed with the sentence. \"As long as you can\'t imagine it, as long as you can\'t see it.
>> correct!
and Our own wrong thinking can keep you from God\'s best.
>> and Our own wrong thinking can keep us from God\'s best.
I have thought that I have already do my best as a engineer from music college.
>> I have thought that I have already did my best as an engineer from music college.
This kind of thinking has been condemning me th mediocrity.
>> This kind of thinking has been condemning me to mediocrity.
\"You can\'t put new wine into old wineskins.\" Jesus said.
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Centuries ago, wine was stored in leather winskins rather than bottles.
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when the wineskin were new, they were soft and pliable,
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But as they aged, they often lost their elasticity.
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If a person pured new wine in an old wineskin, the container would vurst and the wine would be lost.
>> If a person pours a new wine in an old wineskin, the container would burst and the wine would be lost.
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