enthusiasm is the thing that make one do something.

and I want to have it. so I just looked around, trying to find someone who is effort with everything. and I could find lots of people in the website 'TED' I saw many clips but the most impressive man(actually I remembered only this man) played YoYo. he is jap. but I became like him. he had adacity and enthusiasm. even he quited a job for yoyo!. i was impressed by both of his skill and courage. I felt there are many imitable people once again. John, if you keep working like this, you'll make _yourself_ ill. How long have you lot known _yourself_? You should all be ashamed of _yourself_ for behaving like that. They're very selfish; they only think of _themselves_. I cut _myself_ when I was chopping some vegetables. I lost the key and locked _us_ out. We gave _each other_ presents on Christmas Day. I got out of the bath and reached for a towel to dry _me_. We work well as a team because we help _each other_. We did it _ourselves_ because no one wanted to help us

Hi there [이름]^^ I am so impressed tonight because of your composition and your the way you convered in class! Keep it up! You used a different vocabularies to express yourself. I just want you to be careful with the spelling of the words and as well as with your prepositions and articles. You did a good job with your homework. I think the topic was easy for you. Thank you for being a diligent student of mine. See you tomorrow!Have a great night!Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: and I want to have it. >> Enthusiasm is the thing that make one do something and I want to have it. so I just looked around, trying to find someone who is effort with everything. and I could find lots of people in the website \'TED\' >> Did you mean: So I just looked around and trying to find someone who gives all of his effort and I was able to find a lot of people in the website and one of them is \"Ted\". I saw many clips but the most impressive man(actually I remembered only this man)played YoYo. >> I saw a lot of clips but the most impressive man (actually he is the only man I remembered ) was the one who played a Yoyo. he is jap. but I became like him. >> He is a Japanese but I want to be like him. he had adacity and enthusiasm. even he quited a job for yoyo!. >> He is a man with audacity and enthusiasm even though he quit his job because of playing Yoyo. i was impressed by both of his skill and courage. >> I was impressed with this skill and courage.I felt there are many imitable people once again.>> I felt that there are a lot of imitable people once again.John, if you keep working like this, you\'ll make _yourself_ ill. >> Correct!How long have you lot known _yourself_? >> each other You should all be ashamed of _yourself_ for behaving like that. >> yourselves They\'re very selfish; they only think of _themselves_. >> Correct!I cut _myself_ when I was chopping some vegetables. >> Correct!I lost the key and locked _us_ out. >> Correct!We gave _each other_ presents on Christmas Day. >> Correct!I got out of the bath and reached for a towel to dry _me_. >> myself We work well as a team because we help _each other_. >> Correct!We did it _ourselves_ because no one wanted to help us >> Correct!