Enumerate a specific goal you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accompl
학생이 쓴 원문
The goal of my goal this year are as follows.
First, I want to get some performance in my work. When it comes to end of this year, work performance is very important in evaluation, so that I can promote next year and receive more payment.
The second of my goal is to improve my English. I make a long-term plan to study English. I will take 2~3 years to study English so that I can be scouted a better company. It is more and more hard to get a good job in this recession. I have to increase my competitiveness to survive.
The need to increase my competitiveness.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]
I miss you! I hope to see you later tonight. I am wondering if you had a good day yesterday.
Anyway, just tell me about your day later and I wish you did well.
Thank you for sharing your goals with me. I hope you can accomplish them this year! Good luck!!
I will also be here to help you with your goals in studying English, so let\'s do our best together. Okay? :)
Teacher Carmen ^^
The goal of my goal this year are as follows.
>> My goals this year are as follows:
First, I want to get some performance in my work.
>> First, I want to improve my preformance at work.
When it comes to end of this year, work performance is very important in evaluation, so that I can promote next year and receive more payment.
>> At the end of the year, an employee\'s performance is very important to get a promotion and receive an appraisal on the following year.
The second of my goal is to improve my English.
>> My second goal is to improve my English skills.
I make a long-term plan to study English.
>> I will make a long term plan for studying English.
I will take 2~3 years to study English so that I can be scouted a better company.
>> I will study English for 2 to 3 years so that I can be hired by a better company.
It is more and more hard to get a good job in this recession.
>> It is harder to get a job because of the recession.
I have to increase my competitiveness to survive.
>> I have to be competitive to survive.
The need to increase my competitiveness.
>> I need to be more competitive.
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