Enumerate a specific goal you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accompl

2015-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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The goal of my goal this year are as follows. First, I want to get some performance in my work. When it comes to end of this year, work performance is very important in evaluation, so that I can promote next year and receive more payment. The second of my goal is to improve my English. I make a long-term plan to study English. I will take 2~3 years to study English so that I can be scouted a better company. It is more and more hard to get a good job in this recession. I have to increase my competitiveness to survive. The need to increase my competitiveness.

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Hello there, [이름] I miss you! I hope to see you later tonight. I am wondering if you had a good day yesterday. Anyway, just tell me about your day later and I wish you did well. Thank you for sharing your goals with me. I hope you can accomplish them this year! Good luck!! I will also be here to help you with your goals in studying English, so let\'s do our best together. Okay? :)   Teacher Carmen ^^   The goal of my goal this year are as follows. >> My goals this year are as follows: First, I want to get some performance in my work. >> First, I want to improve my preformance at work.   When it comes to end of this year, work performance is very important in evaluation, so that I can promote next year and receive more payment. >> At the end of the year, an employee\'s performance is very important to get a promotion and receive an appraisal on the following year. The second of my goal is to improve my English. >> My second goal is to improve my English skills.   I make a long-term plan to study English. >> I will make a long term plan for studying English.   I will take 2~3 years to study English so that I can be scouted a better company. >> I will study English for 2 to 3 years so that I can be hired by a better company.   It is more and more hard to get a good job in this recession. >> It is harder to get a job because of the recession.   I have to increase my competitiveness to survive. >> I have to be competitive to survive. The need to increase my competitiveness. >> I need to be more competitive.

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