Enumerate the machines and equipment in your office
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all I didn`t know about \"Enumerate\" words so, I looked into my electronic dictionary and then realized the meaning of word
It was the as same as meaning of \"Listed up\"
Well, my office have a lot of machines and equipment because a lot of people used this office.
From [이름]ior to senior, they took action for copying the important paper and printed a lof of work meterial.
In some reason, We often do lots of printing, It was affected our envrionment status and so on
That`s the why goverment have a think of a big issue to treat these things
And so many notebook and monitor were that places in order to work consisely and strictly.
OK. That`s all my office machines . See ya on the phone
강사 첨삭
Hi Justin,
Machines and equipment play essential roles in the office. High-quality office equipment and reliable support services can make a huge difference in your office\'s volume of work and the quality of results. With the proper equipment, your office will function more efficiently and be more productive in a day. \" Work Productively\" ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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First of all I didn`t know about \"Enumerate\" words so, I looked into my electronic dictionary and then realized the meaning of word.
>> First of all, I didn`t know about \"Enumerate\" words so, I looked into my electronic dictionary and then realized the meaning of the word.
It was the as same as meaning of \"Listed up\"
>> It was the as same as the meaning of \"Listed up\" or \" name one by one \'\"
Well, my office have a lot of machines and equipment because a lot of people used this office.
>> Well, my office has a lot of machines and equipment because it\'s very useful to us and all of us in the office can use these machines and equipment to work better and faster.
From [이름]ior to senior, they took action for copying the important paper and printed a lof of work meterial.
>> From my [이름]ior to Senior years these machines and equipment help me a lot in many ways and they took action from copying important paper to printing a lot of work materials.
In some reason, We often do lots of printing, It was affected our envrionment status and so on
>> For some reason, we often do lots of printing that affected our environmental status and so on.
That`s the why goverment have a think of a big issue to treat these things
>> That`s why the government has to think of a good idea or strategy to solve this big issue in our country.
And so many notebook and monitor were that places in order to work consisely and strictly.
>> And so many notebooks and computers were put into place in order to work concisely and strictly.
OK. That`s all my office machines . See ya on the phone
>> OK. That`s all about my office machines and equipment. See you on the phone.
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First of all I didn`t know about \"Enumerate\" words so, I looked into my electronic dictionary and then realized the meaning of word
It was the as same as meaning of \"Listed up\"
Well, my office have a lot of machines and equipment because a lot of people used this office.
From [이름]ior to senior, they took action for copying the important paper and printed a lof of work meterial.
In some reason, We often do lots of printing, It was affected our envrionment status and so on
That`s the why goverment have a think of a big issue to treat these things
And so many notebook and monitor were that places in order to work consisely and strictly.
OK. That`s all my office machines . See ya on the phone
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