environment issue in my company project
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My company have plan to build coal-fired plant in indonesia.
However, there are many opponents about this project in korea.
They insist that the korea should not build power plant based on coal energy.
Because these kind of plant cause air pollute very much.
My company have high level environment treatment technology.
These technology will be employed when we build coal-fired plant in indonesia.
So i\'d like to persuade to make opponents change there opinion about building plant.
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Hello Mr.Lee! :)
However, there are many opponents about this project in korea.
They insist that the korea should not build power plant based on coal energy.
Because these kind of plant cause air pollute very much.
My company have high level environment treatment technology.
These technology will be employed when we build coal-fired plant in indonesia.
So i\'d like to persuade to make opponents change there opinion about building plant.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
My company have plan to build coal-fired plant in indonesia.
>> My company has a plan to build a coal-fired plant in Indonesia.
However, there are many opponents about this project in korea.
>> However, a lot of people are opposing this project in Korea.
They insist that the korea should not build power plant based on coal energy.
>> They are insisting that Korea should not build power plants based on coal energy.
Because these kind of plant cause air pollute very much.
>> Because these kinds of plants cause too much air pollution
My company have high level environment treatment technology.
>> My company has a high-level of environment treatment technology.
These technology will be employed when we build coal-fired plant in indonesia.
>> This technology will be employed when we build a coal-fired plant in Indonesia.
So i\'d like to persuade to make opponents change there opinion about building plant.
>> So, I would like to persuade the people opposing it to change there opinion about building plants.
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