Envy and jealousy
학생이 쓴 원문
There are a lot of things that make us envy and jealous and it’s natural because we are human. Human are feeling relatively and this relative emotion develops us, because we develop by comparing. Although envy and jealousy sometimes lead us to a fatal result like murder or suicide in extreme case, it can help self-realization and give us good effects. We just have to be able to control the emotions
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] Ki! I totally agree with you. It is a common feeling to be jealous and envious. However, we must use these feelings as motivation to work hard and reach our dreams. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you then. Have a good one!~T. Lyn
There are a lot of things that make us envy and jealous and it’s natural because we are human.
>>Correct.
Human are feeling relatively and this relative emotion develops us, because we develop by comparing.
>>Humans develop these emotions because we tend to compare.
Although envy and jealousy sometimes lead us to a fatal result like murder or suicide in extreme case, it can help self-realization and give us good effects.
>>Envy and jealousy can lead to fatal consequences such as murder or suicide in extreme cases, but they can also bring good effects such as self-realization.
We just have to be able to control the emotions
>>We must be able to control our emotions.
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