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HOMEWORK: Do you AGREE or DISAGREE? Why or Why not?
"The only thing that makes the world a better place is LOVE
I'm agree
강사 첨삭
Good evening dear Sally! You did not explain why do you agree on the statement \"The only thing that makes the world a better place is LOVE\". You have to explain your reason why. Can you make a composition about this and send it to me again? Have a fantastic day. See you tomorrow!
Teacher Chloe --
HOMEWORK: Do you AGREE or DISAGREE? Why or Why not? \"The only thing that makes the world a better place is LOVEI\'m agree
>> I agree. (Why?)
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