Erine teacher~*
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name] teacher!!!
Hi there~^^
first of all , im very sorry. i didn't attend our class without any notice yesterday and the day before yesterday.
in case of the day before yesterday, i had individual reason. At that time was very busy from earlly in the morning. so i could not answer your phone.
in case of yesterday, nowdays i am participating the exhibition at gangwondo.
so when u call me, i was with my colleague. actually, it have secret what i use a phone english in my company.
so i did like that. i know,that is not important. but i hope you understand me.
anyway. i am sorry if that is dissapoited to you.
actually ,i thought that postphone the class, but i had not chane cancel entitlement number a month. it also i didn't send a note.
i will stay here until friday. but tomorrow is available join the class.
see ya Erine!!! i always feel reassured by existence of you. i mean it!!!
thanks Erine!!
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Happy Thursday!
It\'s alright. So, I hope that we can have the class tomorrow.
Thank you for sending me this composition.
It\'s so sweet.
Please, find time to check the corrections I\'ve made.
Bye!
T. Erine^^,
Dear [Name] teacher!!!> Dear Teacher Erine!!!Hi there~^^> Correct!first of all , im very sorry.
> First of all, I\'m very sorry.
i didn\'t attend our class without any notice yesterday and the day before yesterday.> I didn\'t attend our class without any notice yesterday and the day before yesterday.in case of the day before yesterday, i had individual reason. > In case of the day before yesterday, I have a reason.
At that time was very busy from earlly in the morning.
> During that time, I was very busy early in the morning.
so i could not answer your phone.> So, I could not answer my phone.
> So, I could not answer you call.in case of yesterday, nowdays i am participating the exhibition at gangwondo.> Yesterday, I participated in the exhibition at Gangwondo.so when u call me, i was with my colleague.
> So, when you called me I was with my colleague.
actually, it have secret what i use a phone english in my company.> Actually, it\'s a secret that I\'m having an English class using my phone in the company.so i did like that.
> So I did that.
i know,that is not important. > I know that is not important.
but i hope you understand me.> I do hope that you understand me.anyway. i am sorry if that is dissapoited to you.> Anyway, I am sorry if I disappointed you.actually ,i thought that postphone the class, but i had not chane cancel entitlement number a month.
> Actually, I thought that if I postpone the class I will have no chance to cancel the class next month.
it also i didn\'t send a note.> I also didn\'t send a note.i will stay here until friday.
> I will stay here until Friday.
but tomorrow is available join the class.> I can have the class tomorrow.see ya Erine!!! i always feel reassured by existence of you. i mean it!!!> See you Erine!!! I always feel assured by your existence. I mean it!!! thanks Erine!!
> Thanks Erine!!
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