Esaay (Jan, 7th, 2022)
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How much does the weekend mean to you?
>>It means a lot to me. The weekend is the time when I can spend with my loved ones
I find myself feeling happy always on weekends, most of the time being with my family, and sometimes spending with my neighbors who live right next to where I live now.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
That is actually true. For most people, it\'s the time for themselves, like taking a rest and also to spend time with family. That sounds really good because you are always trying your best to make time for your family.
Thank you for sharing and talk to you later~
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It means a lot to me. The weekend is the time when I can spend with my loved ones
>> Correct!
I find myself feeling happy always on weekends, most of the time being with my family, and sometimes spending with my neighbors who live right next to where I live now.
>> Correct!
I find myself feeling happy always on weekends, most of the time being with my family, and sometimes spending with my neighbors who live right next to where I live now.
>> Correct!
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