Especially be careful to language
학생이 쓴 원문
Probably language.
I think language is makes image.
I told you about my performance team members, they are parents... I think they shouldn\'t with them long time.
My motto is when the family getting the close connection and relationship, and then they can be most harmonious family.
And especially important be careful  to be  language.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
I think communication is key to having a great family. Everyone should be open so that they would live a great life.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
-Teacher EliseProbably language.
>> I would probably be language.
I think language is makes image.
>> I think language makes a person\'s image.
I told you about my performance team members, they are parents... I think they shouldn\'t with them long time.
>> I told you about my performance team members, they are already parents.
My motto is when the family getting the close connection and relationship, and then they can be most harmonious family.
I told you about my performance team members, they are parents... I think they shouldn\'t with them long time.
And especially important be careful  to be  language.
>> It is important to be careful when using language.
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