Essay - answer using technology, values, environment and health

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One of biggest change is we can control more time than time I was a child.
>> One of biggest change is that we can control more time compared to when I was a child.

Technology evolution makes us to overcome many barriers caused by time and space.

>>Technology evolution makes us overcome many barriers caused by time and space.

Human learns from a offline-community for last many decades, but we can get tons of information from a digital environment.

>> Human learns from an offline-community for the last many decades, but we can get tons of information from a digital environment.

People do not really need to meet other people to get informative values.

>> CORRECT

AI searches and provide the information watt I need in a second.
>> AI searches provide the information I need in a second.
 Health science supports us to live longer and healthier.

>> CORRECT

OR>> Health science allows us to live longer and healthier.

Now current medicine and operation can cure most diseases.

>> CORRECT

In 1980\'s, average life length was 70 but now it is more than 80.

>> During the 1980\'s, the average life length was 70 but now it is more than 80.

We get 10 years’ time.
>> CORRECT
It is really time to think how I live and find personal value in the digital era.

>> It is really time to think about how I live and find personal value in the digital era.