Essay - eBooks vs. printed textbooks
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No, I do not agree with the idea that student’s textbooks be replaced by notebook computers. Although an electronic book could be a supplement to the printed textbook, it should never be a primary tool for a student to use. The reasons for my insist on keeping the text book is because the printed textbook can help a student concentrate more effectively and comportably than the eBook. This is based on my personal experience that reading eBooks is really annoying and irritating, and my eyes get fatigued shortly so that I cannot concentrate. Moreover, when I took an exam, I got much higher scores in the paper based test, than in the web based one. Secondly you can put down a note or highlight in the printed textbook, which will greatly help you memorize the phrase you marked. And your memory will last longer when you learn via eBooks. While eBooks give us a lot of benefits like less expensive, easy to carry, contain lots of information, easy to update, etc,I still prefer the textbooks
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon! Thank you for sharing your idea about the use of textbooks over eBooks. You gave a very smart opinion. Keep on expressing yourself. See you in class!
Teacher Nina
No, I do not agree with the idea that student\'s textbooks be replaced by notebook computers.
>> Correct.
Although an electronic book could be a supplement to the printed textbook, it should never be a primary tool for a student to use.
>> Although an electronic book could be a supplement to the printed textbook, it should never be the primary tool for a student to use.
The reasons for my insist on keeping the text book is because the printed textbook can help a student concentrate more effectively and comportably than the eBook.
>> The reason why I insist on keeping the text book is because the printed textbook can help a student concentrate more effectively and comfortably.
This is based on my personal experience that reading eBooks is really annoying and irritating, and my eyes get fatigued shortly so that I cannot concentrate.
>> This is based on my personal experience that reading eBooks is really annoying and irritating especially to the eyes so I cannot concentrate.
Moreover, when I took an exam, I got much higher scores in the paper based test, than in the web based one.
>> Moreover, when I took an exam, I got a higher scores in the paper based test, than in the web based.
Secondly you can put down a note or highlight in the printed textbook, which will greatly help you memorize the phrase you marked.
>> Secondly, you can put a note or highlight in the printed textbook, which will greatly help you memorize the phrase you marked.
And your memory will last longer when you learn via eBooks.
>> Correct.
While eBooks give us a lot of benefits like less expensive, easy to carry, contain lots of information, easy to update, etc,I still prefer the textbooks
>> While eBooks give us a lot of benefits like it is less expensive, it\'s easy to carry, it contains a lot of information, it\'s easy to update, etc,I still prefer the use of printed textbooks.
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