Essay - vacation spot

I went to Cebu with my wife and a few other couples of my friends about 10 years ago to spend my summer vacation. We visited a few attractive sites like the James Bond island. The most unforgettable thing was having the picnic lunch after snorkeling at the beautiful isle that I do not remember the name. It was probably Nalusuan Island or Pandanon Island. It was part of the hopping tour package. The lunch was prepared by the native residents who were living in the isle. What they prepared were barbeque and grilled sea foods such as lobsters, skewer fish, kebab, etc. It was so delicious. The place where we had lunch was a bungalow on the small hill so we could look down the beautiful blue sea in front of us. It was marvelous.

Hello there!

Wow! I can imagine what you had experienced before.

I\'m imagining the island that you mention and the house in a hill where you can see the beautiful sea.

Great!

I can see that you really enjoyed your vacation.

I hope that you will also have some time to come back here to have your summer vacation.

It\'s already summer in your country isn\'t it?

I hope you\'ll have another marvelous trip.

I\'ll see you on our class! ^^

T. Nina

I went to Cebu with my wife and a few other couples of my friends about 10 years ago to spend my summer vacation.

>> Ten years ago, I went to Cebu with my wife and a few couple of friends to spend our summer vacation.

We visited a few attractive sites like the James Bond island.

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The most unforgettable thing was having the picnic lunch after snorkeling at the beautiful isle that I do not remember the name.

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 It was probably Nalusuan Island or Pandanon Island.

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It was part of the hopping tour package.

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The lunch was prepared by the native residents who were living in the isle.

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>> OR: The native residents of the isle prepared for our lunch.

What they prepared were barbeque and grilled sea foods such as lobsters, skewer fish, kebab, etc.

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It was so delicious.

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The place where we had lunch was a bungalow on the small hill so we could look down the beautiful blue sea in front of us.

>> The place where we had lunch was a bungalow located on a small hill so we could look down to the beautiful blue sea in front of us.

It was marvelous.

>> CORRECT