essay 1

2024-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, my name is Ryan. today i will tell you \'What is the best gift to give to your friends?\' i think the best present is game item because my friends like game.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ryan,

Good evening and thank you for sending your answer to me.

The main correction I have here would be the capitalization of letters at the beginning of your sentences.

But still, you did very well. ^^

~ Teacher Gina

Hello, my name is Ryan. today i will tell you \'What is the best gift to give to your friends?\'

i think the best present is game item because my friends like game.

>> Hello, my name is Ryan. Today I will tell you, \'What is the best gift to give to your friends? \'

I think the best present is a game item because my friends like games.

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