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Thank you for your proofreading. the below is a essay about benefit from modern communications technology. Nowadays, many people have a variety of communication technology devices, such as smart phone that operate social network programs, which have became a necessity of modern lifestyle. Development in communication technology allows people to communicate with each other more conveniently and easily than in the past. First of all, the developed communication technology enables people to keep in touch with each other anytime and anywhere. Frequent communications can help solve the problems, for example, ignorance, apathy, and misunderstanding that would occur by lack of communication.

Hi Dennis!! Happy Monday!! Well thanks for passing this essay. Your thoughts on this essay are more collective now. But also try to be very careful with your articles i.e. (to, the, is). All in all your composition is good. Keep on practicing okay and be very patient. Start your week right!! Lei J   Thank you for your proofreading. >>correct the below is a essay about benefit from modern communications technology. >>Below is an essay about the benefits/advantages of moderm communication technology. Nowadays, many people have a variety of communication technology devices, >>correct such as smart phone that operate social network programs, which have became a necessity of modern lifestyle. >>Such as smart phones that can operate social networking programs, which became a necessity for modern lifestyle. Development in communication technology allows people to communicate with each other more conveniently and easily than in the past. >>The development if communication technology allows people to communicate with each other more conveniently and easily. First of all, the developed communication technology enables people to keep in touch with each other anytime and anywhere. >>correct Frequent communications can help solve the problems, for example, ignorance, apathy, and misunderstanding that would occur by lack of communication. >>Frequent communication can help solve some social problems, for example, ignorance, apathy and misunderstanding that would possible happen due to lack of communicaton.