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The movie I saw recently is "Begin Again". I choose it because my favorite critic recommended it and also I am a big fan of the heroine, Kiera Knightly. There was a couple working together as a songwriter and a singer. Because of their partnership, singer(boyfriend)'s album got huge success. But she found that he had cheated on her so their relationship was borken and she started to work as a busker. One day, the famous music producer listen her song and he suggested her to make an album together. The producer also had a hard time in his life because his wife cheated on him. This two people got started work together and they healed each other by the passion of music. The most facinating part of this movie is sound track. In korea, the OST of this movie lanked on top of the OST album board. The actor shown as bad boyfriend is lead vocal of Maroon 5, which is well-known British band. I never expected that Kiera sing so well as much as her act. All musics combinated well with story.

Hi there Veronica! I recieved your composition and I am glad to know you are doing your homework. Your sentences are very good. You use a lot of complicated words in your sentences. Great Job! I\'d like to see this movie as well I\'m a huge fan of Keira Knightly and Adam Levigne as well! By the way, here are the corrections I made Have a great day! The movie I saw recently is \"Begin Again\". >> Great! Or> The title of the movie I saw recently is \"Begin Again\". I choose it because my favorite critic recommended it and also I am a big fan of the heroine, Kiera Knightly. >> I chose it because my favorite critic recommended it and I am also a big fan of the heroine, Keira Knightly.There was a couple working together as a songwriter and a singer.  >> The story is about a couple working together as a singer and a song writer. Because of their partnership, singer(boyfriend)\'s album got huge success. >> Because of their partnership, the singer\'s album achieved a huge success.  But she found that he had cheated on her so their relationship was borken and she started to work as a busker. >> But the girl found out that he had cheated on her. Their relationship ended and she started to work as a busker. One day, the famous music producer listen her song and he suggested her to make an album together. >> One day, a famous producer listened to her performance and offered to make an album together. The producer also had a hard time in his life because his wife cheated on him. >> The producer was also going through a hard time because his wife cheated on him. This two people got started work together and they healed each other by the passion of music. >>The two people started to work together and they healed each other by the passion of music.The most facinating part of this movie is sound track. >> The most fascinating part of this movie is it\'s soundtrack. In korea, the OST of this movie lanked on top of the OST album board. >> The OST of this movie ranked top of the Korean OST album board. The actor shown as bad boyfriend is lead vocal of Maroon 5, which is well-known British band. >>The actor who played the bad boyfriend role is the lead vocalist of Maroon 5, a well-known British band. I never expected that Kiera sing so well as much as her act. >> I never expected that Keira can sing as much as she can act. All musics combinated well with story. >>All the music combined well with the story.