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학생이 쓴 원문
My cousin sister (hannah) is really good at everything. so I really like my cousin sister.
Why I like my cousin?? because my cousin sister always play with me, she gives a lot of snacks and pens, she good at study so I always ask difficult questions to my cousin so my cousin sister
teaches difficult questions, and My cousin sister have a lot of great cook recipe so she always
cooks delicious foods!! my cousin sister is like umm...an all around robot I think anyone read this essay. You will agree on this essay. but really sadly... I am not have a one\'s own sister. so i\'m really sad....just I have really pretty and perfect cousin sister... but It is okay!! but now a days
she is middle school first so she sometimes come to my home...TT so I love my cousin sister and I\'m really happy with my cousin sister. and
강사 첨삭
Hello Hannah! ^^
I am so happy to hear about your female cousin~
I am so happy to hear about your female cousin~
You have made really good sentences!
Keep it up!
I am sure Hyona also loves you very much! ^_^
You are a wonderful cousin to her too!
Thank you for this!
- T. Rina
1. My cousin sister (hannah) is really good at everything.
>> My female cousin, Hannah, is really good at everything.
2. so I really like my cousin sister.
>> So, I really like my cousin.
3. Why I like my cousin??
>> Why do I like my cousin?
4. because my cousin sister always play with me, she gives a lot of snacks and pens
>> Because my cousin always plays with me and she gives me a lot of snacks and pens.
5. she good at study so I always ask difficult questions to my cousin so my cousin sister teaches difficult questions,
>> She is good at studying, so I always ask difficult questions to her.
6. and My cousin sister have a lot of great cook recipe so she always cooks delicious foods!!
>> And she has a lot of great recipes, so she always cooks delicious foods.
7. my cousin sister is like umm...an all around robot.
>> My cousin is like an all-around robot.
8. I think anyone read this essay. You will agree on this essay.
>> I think anyone who will read this essay will agree with me.
9. but really sadly... I am not have a one\'s own sister. so i\'m really sad....
>> But I don\'t have my own sister, so I am really sad.
10. just I have really pretty and perfect cousin sister...
>> I just have a really pretty and perfect female cousin.
11. but It is okay!!
>> CORRECT!
12. but now a days she is middle school first so she sometimes come to my home...TT
>> But nowadays, she is a middle school student, so she sometimes comes to my home.
13. so I love my cousin sister and I\'m really happy with my cousin sister.
>> I love my cousin and I am really happy with her.
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