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I usually spend my time staying and relaxing at home on a long weekend. I want to be with my family on a long weekend, but now i want to hang out with my friends a little more than being with my family.
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I usually spend my time staying and relaxing at home on a long weekend.
>> or: More often than not, I spend my time chilling at home on a long weekend.
I want to be with my family on a long weekend, but now i want to hang out with my friends a little more than being with my family.
>> or: I used to spend more time with my family during that period, but now, I\'d rather hang out with my friends.
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