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Here are my corrections for you:

NO i am not. I think people have to have relaxed. 

>> No, I don\'t think so, I think people have to relax.

but in Korea, is too fast. 

>> But here in Korea, everything is too fast.

Korean like fast, fast, and fast. so I think other cultures are not too relaxed. and Korean is too fast. 

>> Koreans like to be fast, so I think other cultures are not too relaxed.

also in Korea, when people order a stir fried rice cake, it takes 30 to 1 hour,, 

>> Also in Korea, when people order a stir fried rice cake and it takes 30 to 1 hour before they get it, people will say, \"Oh it is too late\". 

so other cultures are not too relaxed

>> So with that said, I think other cultures are not too relaxed either.