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I like nike.
because there is al lot of simple and pretty T shirts
and also the backpack and hat is simple.
almost korean students like to wear nike.
so I like nike
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I like nike. because there is al lot of simple and pretty T shirt
>>> I like Nike because there are a lot of simple and pretty T-shirts.
and also the backpack and hat is simple.
>>> Another reason is that their backpacks and hats are simple.
almost korean students like to wear nike. so I like nike
>>> Almost all Korean students like to wear Nike, so I like it.
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