essay 11
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, my name is Ryan. today i will tell you \'If i could plant something in a garden, what would it be and why?\'
If i could plant something, i could plant flowers because flowers are beautiful anywhere
강사 첨삭
Hi Ryan,
Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
You did well on your sentence. The grammar is correct. I just fixed the capitalization of some words as well as the punctuation. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Hello, my name is Ryan. today i will tell you \'If i could plant something in a garden, what would it be and why?\'
>> Hello, my name is Ryan. Today I will tell you, \'If I could plant something in a garden, what would it be and why? \'
If i could plant something, i could plant flowers because flowers are beautiful anywhere
>> If I could plant something, I could plant flowers because flowers are beautiful anywhere.
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