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I’ll debt settlement due to buying my house.
And I’ll buy the small shopping malls that can receive the monthly rent.
Because I want to quit my company and spend more time with my son.
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Good evening Ms. [Name]. Thank you for taking the time to express your opinion regarding this topic. I appreciate your thoughts. ^_^
T. Irene
I’ll debt settlement due to buying my house.
>>> I\'ll settle my debt from buying my house.
OR
>>> I\'ll settle my house loan.
And I’ll buy the small shopping malls that can receive the monthly rent.
And I’ll buy the small shopping malls that can receive the monthly rent.
>>> Next, I\'ll build small shopping malls so I can rent them out and get monthly rents.
Because I want to quit my company and spend more time with my son.
Because I want to quit my company and spend more time with my son.
>>> After that, I will quit my company and spend more time with my son.
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