Essay
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First, school expenses is more expansive than public high school. Second private school has a variety of curriculum than public high school.
So I think it is better to learn and experience various things other than the class.
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T. Irene
First, school expenses is more expansive than public high school.
>>> First, school expenses in private schools are more expensive than in public high schools.
Second private school has a variety of curriculum than public high school.
>>> Second, a private school has more curriculums (British)/curricula (American) than a public high school.
So I think it is better to learn and experience various things other than the class.
So I think it is better to learn and experience various things other than the class.
>>> So I think it is better to learn and experience various things outside the class.
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