Essay
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I came back to office after 3 and half months finishing the working from home. I have working hard in office on weekdays. To spend a lot of time with my son and my husband, I go to various places with them. For example, kids cafe, park,lotte tower,amusement park and so on.
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Good evening Ms. [이름]g K[이름]g. Thank you for giving or expressing your thoughts about the topic. I appreciate it. ^_^
T. Irene
I came back to office after 3 and half months finishing the working from home.
>>> I came back to office after 3 and half months of finishing work at home.
I have working hard in office on weekdays.
>>> I have been working hard in the office on weekdays.
To spend a lot of time with my son and my husband, I go to various places with them.
>>> So I could spend a lot of time with my son and my husband on weekends. I go/travel to various places with them.
For example, kids cafe, park,lotte tower,amusement park and so on.
>>> For example, we go to different kids\' cafes, parks, Lotte tower, amusement parks and so on.
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