Essay
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I think covid 19 make the mental and emontion health worse.
And As meetings with many people are restricted, I feel depressed and my vitality seems to have decreased.
Furthermore, I was so afraid that I might have COVID-19 due to other symptoms such as colds and body aches.
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Good evening ma\'am. Thank you for sharing your opinion regarding this situation. ^_^
T. Irene
I think covid 19 make the mental and emontion health worse.
>>> I think COVID-19 makes our mental and emotional health/condition worse.
And As meetings with many people are restricted, I feel depressed and my vitality seems to have decreased.
And As meetings with many people are restricted, I feel depressed and my vitality seems to have decreased.
>>> As the number of people who can gather is limited/restricted, I felt depressed and my vitality seems to have decreased.
Furthermore, I was so afraid that I might have COVID-19 due to other symptoms such as colds and body aches.
Furthermore, I was so afraid that I might have COVID-19 due to other symptoms such as colds and body aches.
>>> Furthermore, I was so afraid that I got COVID-19 because I felt some symptoms such as colds and body aches.
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