Essay
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I think that The time is not yet ripe for living with covid-19.
The number of person confirmed to be infected with COVID-19 has not decreased dramatically,and The case of COVID-19 infection is also increasing.
I think that It would have been better if the restrictions were removed step by step.
강사 첨삭
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T. Irene
I think that The time is not yet ripe for living with covid-19.
>>> I think that time is not yet ripe (right) for \"Living with COVID-19\".
The number of person confirmed to be infected with COVID-19 has not decreased dramatically,and The case of COVID-19 infection is also increasing.
The number of person confirmed to be infected with COVID-19 has not decreased dramatically,and The case of COVID-19 infection is also increasing.
>>> The number of people confirmed to be infected with COVID-19 has not decreased dramatically (significantly). Quite the opposite (Contrary to that), it is actually increasing.
I think that It would have been better if the restrictions were removed step by step.
I think that It would have been better if the restrictions were removed step by step.
>>> Correct.
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