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In the past days, the qualities of a great son and daughter were to study hard and have a good job, such as a lawyer and a doctor. Past Parents were strongly prejudiced about their son and daughter’s jobs.. But now, the perception has changed. Parents think that it is better to live independently by themselves while doing what they like rather than the type of job.
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In the past days, the qualities of a great son and daughter were to study hard and have a good job, such as a lawyer and a doctor.
>>> In the past, some of the good qualities of a son or daughter are being studious and later on, getting a good job such as lawyer or doctor.
Past Parents were strongly prejudiced about their son and daughter’s jobs..
>>> Correct.
But now, the perception has changed.
>>> Correct.
Parents think that it is better to live independently by themselves while doing what they like rather than the type of job.
>>> Parents think that it is better for their children to live independently by themselves while doing what they like rather than getting a job they don\'t like.
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