ESSAY
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ESSAY: Have you ever been lost and couldn’t find directions? What happened and how did you get out of the situation? How good are you with directions?
At the park when I was young. I was walking around and I found my MOMMY. I am very GOOD at diretions
강사 첨삭
ESSAY: Have you ever been lost and couldn’t find directions? What happened and how did you get out of the situation? How good are you with directions?
At the park when I was young.
At the park when I was young.
>>> I was at a park when I was young. I couldn\'t see my mom around me.
I was walking around and I found my MOMMY.
>>> Correct.
OR
>>> I walked around until I found my mommy.
I am very GOOD at directions.
>>> Correct.
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