Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Especially these day, I can get a lot of information on YouTube.
I\'m getting various information I need while raising a child. for example, discipline method, various ways to play, a lot of infant food recipe and so on.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [이름]g K[이름]g. Thank you for your interesting idea about the topic. ^_^
T. Irene
I think that Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.
>>> Correct.
Especially these day, I can get a lot of information on YouTube.
>>> Correct.
I\'m getting various information I need while raising a child.
I\'m getting various information I need while raising a child.
>>> Correct.
For example, discipline method, various ways to play, a lot of infant food recipe and so on.
>>> For example, disciplining methods, various ways to play with children, a lot of infant food recipes and so on.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.