Essay
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I believe in online dating. Because my friend have met her husband though blind date application.
However, in order to maintain a continuous relationship, I think they need to meet face to face, not just talk online.
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I believe in online dating. Because my friend have met her husband though blind date application.
>>> I believe in online dating because my friend met her husband though a blind date application.
However, in order to maintain a continuous relationship, I think they need to meet face to face, not just talk online.
However, in order to maintain a continuous relationship, I think they need to meet face to face, not just talk online.
>>> Correct.
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