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2022-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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when COVID-19 first became a big issue, i thought that it is not serious problem. I have believed that covid would be disappear over time as like sas and mers. However, too much time has passed and I\'m worried if I can go back to before Covid-19.

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Good evening Ms. [이름]g K[이름]g. Your writing skill is really good. ^_^
T. Irene
when COVID-19 first became a big issue, i thought that it is not serious problem. 
>>> When COVID-19 first became a big issue, I thought that it was not a serious problem. 
I have believed that covid would be disappear over time as like sas and mers. 
>>> I have believed that COVID-19 would be disappear over time just like SARS and MERS. [I had the same thoughts before. ^_^]
However, too much time has passed and I\'m worried if I can go back to before Covid-19.
>>> However, too much time has passed already and I\'m worried if we can still go back to the time before Covid-19.





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