Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a good thing about wearing a mask outside all the time.
1. Most people don\'t catch a cold easily.
2. We can be prevented from Fine dust.
3. Cosmetics costs have decreased.( for example:lipstick)
4. I can hide my expression.
In addition, it is good that unnecessary dinners at work are reduced.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [이름] K[이름]g! I hope you are feeling warm tonight. It\'s funny when you mentioned about decreased cost of cosmetics. That would really be great. Especially the next which is you hiding your expression. I find that useful too. ^_^
T. Irene
There is a good thing about wearing a mask outside all the time.
>>> There are some good things about wearing a mask outside all the time.
1. Most people don\'t catch a cold easily.
1. Most people don\'t catch a cold easily.
>>> Most people won\'t catch a cold easily.
2. We can be prevented from Fine dust.
2. We can be prevented from Fine dust.
>>> We can protect ourselves from the fine dust.
3. Cosmetics costs have decreased.( for example:lipstick)
3. Cosmetics costs have decreased.( for example:lipstick)
>>> Correct.
4. I can hide my expression.
>>> Correct.
In addition, it is good that unnecessary dinners at work are reduced.
4. I can hide my expression.
>>> Correct.
In addition, it is good that unnecessary dinners at work are reduced.
>>> Correct.
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