Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
Why is English fluency significant for you?
When I was middle school student, My English skill is bad. After entering high school, I studied English very hard. So, My English result is gradually improved, and I feel satisfaction. And most of the reason in study hard, I respected my English teacher. Because he is very fluency pronunciation, and He is very humorous. Also, Sometimes He watch drama for us, that was “Modern family.” We are so excited whenever watch this drama, and we could learn expression from drama. All these reasons may make me felt English is very interesting subject. So, in conclusion, I want feel satisfaction in learning English again, and by learning English is helpful in traveling English-speaking country. And I really want to be fluent in English!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this [이름] [이름]! keep them coming. Learning a foreign language may be tough but if you put your heart and mind in it, it is very possible.
Have a good day! - T. Beth
Have a good day! - T. Beth
When I was middle school student, My English skill is bad.
>>> When I was a middle school student, my English skill was bad.
After entering high school, I studied English very hard.
>>> correct
So, My English result is gradually improved, and I feel satisfaction.
>>> So, my English test result has gradually improved, and I feel satisfaction.
And most of the reason in study hard, I respected my English teacher. Because he is very fluency pronunciation, and He is very humorous.
>>> And the main reason in studying hard, I respected my English teacher because he was very fluent in pronunciation, and he was very humorous.
Also, Sometimes He watch drama for us, that was “Modern family.”
>>> Also, he sometimes let us watch a drama, that was “Modern family.”
We are so excited whenever watch this drama, and we could learn expression from drama.
>>> We were so excited whenever we were to watch this drama, and we could learn expression from it.
All these reasons may make me felt English is very interesting subject.
>>> All these reasons may have made me felt English is a very interesting subject.
So, in conclusion, I want feel satisfaction in learning English again, and by learning English is helpful in traveling English-speaking country.
>>> So, in conclusion, I want to feel satisfaction in learning English again, and learning English is helpful in traveling to an English-speaking country.
And I really want to be fluent in English!
>>> correct
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