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Yes, The weather affects my mood.
Cloudy or rainy weather makes me feel down and depressed. On the other hand, I feel better on sunny day.
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Does the weather affect your mood? If so, how?
Yes, The weather affects my mood.
>> Yes, the weather affects my mood.
>> or: I would say that the weather definitely affects my mood.
Cloudy or rainy weather makes me feel down and depressed.
>> CORRECT~~
On the other hand, I feel better on sunny day.
>> On the other hand, I feel better on sunny days.
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