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I don\'t really like to going out and meeting people a lot becuae when i go out and meet people, i get tired esaily and make me wanted to go home. I think it\'s becuase i don\'t have enough energy cause i don\'t usually exercise, and also think i feel drained. Meeting new people needs emotional effort for not being rude and it\'s tired of me. So just meeting friends who are close with me is better to me.
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Do you like meeting new people?
I don\'t really like to going out and meeting people a lot becuae when i go out and meet people, i get tired esaily and make me wanted to go home.
>>> I don’t really like going out and meeting people often, because when I do, I get tired easily, and it makes me want to go home
I think it\'s becuase i don\'t have enough energy cause i don\'t usually exercise, and also think i feel drained.
>>> I think it’s because I don’t have enough energy, since I don’t usually exercise, and I also feel drained.
Meeting new people needs emotional effort for not being rude and it\'s tired of me.
>>> Meeting new people requires emotional effort to avoid being rude, and it’s exhausting for me.
So just meeting friends who are close with me is better to me.
>>> That\'s why I prefer spending time with close friends.
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