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An jung geun who is an independence activist was a leader of Korean Empire\'s anti-Japanese volunteer army. He assassinated Ito Hirobumi at Harbin Station on October 26, 1909. Ito Hirobumi was the person who took a lead Korea’s colonization by Japan. Ito Hirobumi died, and An Jung-geun was arrested on the spot. After that An Jung-geun was sentenced to death and died. An Jung-geun who fought against Japanese who killed a lot of guiltless people wanting independence is a Korean hero who made today’s Republic of Korea.
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An jung geun who is an independence activist was a leader of Korean Empire\'s anti-Japanese volunteer army.
>>> An Jung-geun was a prominent independence activist and a leader in the Korean Empire’s resistance forces.
He assassinated Ito Hirobumi at Harbin Station on October 26, 1909.
>>> OR: On October 26, 1909, he carried out the assassination of Ito Hirobumi at Harbin Station.
Ito Hirobumi was the person who took a lead Korea’s colonization by Japan.
>>> Hirobumi was the person who took the lead in Japan’s colonization of Korea.
Ito Hirobumi died, and An Jung-geun was arrested on the spot.
>>> OR: After the assassination, An Jung-geun was arrested at the scene.
After that An Jung-geun was sentenced to death and died.
>>> An Jung-geun was later sentenced to death and executed.
An Jung-geun who fought against Japanese who killed a lot of guiltless people wanting independence is a Korean hero who made today’s Republic of Korea.
>>> An Jung-geun, who fought against the Japanese forces that killed many innocent people seeking independence, is remembered as a national hero in Korea.
>>> OR: He is celebrated in Korea for his role in the independence movement and his sacrifice.
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