Essay
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I don\'t think aerobic exercise is always better than other types of exercise. Since the benefits of types of exercise is different for each person, it is important to determine what types of exercises we need. For example, I chose aerobic exercise because my physical is bad and want to lose weight. If we want to build visual muscle, i think working out will be better. Best is both of them.
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Hi, Ji O!
You are right. The exercises we do should depend on what we need and our goals when it comes to fitness. Exercises become the best for us if they help us stay fit and are suitable for us.
-T. Caitlyn
I don\'t think aerobic exercise is always better than other types of exercise.
>> CORRECT
Since the benefits of types of exercise is different for each person, it is important to determine what types of exercises we need.
>> Since the benefits of different types of exercise are different for each person, it is important to determine what types of exercise we need.
For example, I chose aerobic exercise because my physical is bad and want to lose weight.
>> For example, I chose aerobic exercise because my physical condition is poor and I want to lose weight.
If we want to build visual muscle, i think working out will be better.
>> If we want to build visible muscles, I think strength training will be better.
Best is both of them.
>> They are both the best.
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