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These days, many people are so busy becasue of working, so even if they can get a short vacation that will be well relaxing to them. For each person, they have different way of vacation. For some of them, a short trip could be a good vacation, for others, staying at home and getting rest could be a good vacation. Even if people are given even a short vacation, they will surely rest happily.
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Hi, Ji O!
You are right! Even a short vacation can give busy people great relief, and it’s also up to them how they want to spend it. Personally, I prefer a staycation whenever I have a short vacation.
- T. Caitlyn
These days, many people are so busy becasue of working, so even if they can get a short vacation that will be well relaxing to them.
>> These days, many people are so busy because of work that even a short vacation can be very relaxing for them.
For each person, they have different way of vacation.
>> Each person has a different way of taking a vacation.
For some of them, a short trip could be a good vacation, for others, staying at home and getting rest could be a good vacation.
>> For some, a short trip could be a good vacation; for others, staying at home and resting could be a good vacation.
Even if people are given even a short vacation, they will surely rest happily.
>> Even if people are given only a short vacation, they will surely be able to rest happily.
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