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학생이 쓴 원문
I have seen my family since I was young, and they have always been the same. So, I don\'t think I have learned something new about a family member during a gathering. My family have always been good people, and I\'m so happy that they have been consistent. I hope to maintain a good relationship with them, and if i get something new, i hope that is a good news.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ji O!
I really admire your family based on your answer and the stories you told me during class. I hope that you also maintain a good relationship with them because I think that is already rare nowadays.
- T. Caitlyn
I have seen my family since I was young, and they have always been the same.
>> CORRECT
So, I don\'t think I have learned something new about a family member during a gathering.
>> So, I don\'t think I have learned anything new about a family member during a gathering.
My family have always been good people, and I\'m so happy that they have been consistent.
>> My family has always been good people, and I\'m so happy that they have been consistent.
I hope to maintain a good relationship with them, and if i get something new, i hope that is a good news.
>> I hope to maintain a good relationship with them, and if I learn something new, I hope it is good news.
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